Final draft of the Community Sections Video. Any feedback @Ryan_Gilmore and @ryandewitt ?
I think that is excellent! Well paced. Like the music. Great job!
I agree. It's nice. You've got a great voice for VO and your delivery is engaging. Only minor suggestion I have is to change "Got ideas or requests..." to "Do you have ideas or requests...." The "Got" is a little harsh in the audio and makes the sentence difficult to parse the first time I heard it. If you're not making any other VO changes though it's probably not worth it alone.
That's an easy minor change I can do after I get back on the 16th
This will be very helpful thanks. A common theme we are finding in EMEA is the need to educate our users regarding how to help themselves by using JMP Community.
Thank-you,
Malcolm
Question for you: If this is to be posted for external JMP users to learn how to navigate the community, do you think people will be confused to see the internal parts of the community? Because you are signed in when creating the video, the top level shows the inside JMP option, and when you scroll through some discussions, you see items like "what's new with Seagate" posted by Sarah Springer and another internal post from Gail. These posts would not be visible to someone outside of JMP.
I really like it, and will refer people to this video. I'm just not sure you want the video to contain some specific internal items on it.
Good observations @ledi_trutna . I agree. We'll record so that it shows what a typically user will see. Thank you!
Your Voice and pacing is fantastic Ian. Great job. Here's some feedback.
Again great job. Thanks for doing this.
Good catch @ledi_trutna . Thanks!
